Letter 218: 1. Your life of eminent fortitude and fruitfulness towards the Lord our God has brought to us great joy. For you have made choice of instruction from your youth upwards, that you may still find wisdom even to grey hairs; Sirach 6:18 for wisdom is the grey hair unto men, and an unspotted life is old age; Wisdom 4:9 which may the Lord, who knows h...

Augustine of HippoPalatinus|c. 422 AD|augustine hippo
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Augustine to Palatinus, greetings.

I received your letter, and I appreciate your honesty. You say that you find my writings difficult, that my sentences are too long, that my arguments twist and turn until you lose the thread. You say you wish I would write more simply.

I hear this more often than you might think. And I accept the criticism — in part.

I do write long sentences. This is partly a fault of training (the rhetorician's habit dies hard) and partly a consequence of the subject matter. Theology is complex because God is infinite and our language is finite. When I try to express something that exceeds the capacity of human words, the sentences grow longer — not because I enjoy complexity, but because the truth I am chasing will not fit into a short sentence any more than the ocean will fit into a cup.

But I also acknowledge that some of my difficulty is unnecessary. I am sometimes more enamored of the argument than of the reader, and that is a failure of charity. A writer who forgets his reader has forgotten half his purpose.

So here is what I will try to do: I will continue to pursue the truth as far as my mind can follow it. But I will also try, more than I have in the past, to bring you along with me. Not by simplifying the truth — the truth is not simple — but by being more careful about the path I lay through it.

Thank you for pushing back. A writer who is never challenged by his readers will eventually stop listening to them — and a bishop who stops listening has already stopped serving.

Farewell.

Modern English rendering for readability. See the 19th-century translation or original Latin/Greek for scholarly use.

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